Colour: blue
Animal: dog
Flower/Plant/Tree: rose
Water: huka falls
Season: summer
Time of day: 12:00am
we learnt about the writting skills
here's my creative writing.
I've gone to huka falls and it's a nice sunny day to go and watch some people canoe down the fresh rough water of the huka falls and yeah my brother got this lamboghini and a dirt bike 450 4 stroke and his quad it's 150 cc and it's red with some writting on it.
My brother jumped in this car a z nissan 350 horse power and it go's so fast that it's so easy to crash coz it's just too fast and plus it's racing car sports car and it's it's loud when you go fast and when you take off, in second gear you hit 120km.
So imagine how fast you would be going on the fourth gear and it's a six speed and 6 litre and it's got a spoiler on the back the car and it's lowered and got black rims and tinted widows and it's a turbo and its good looking and it's got a traction thing on it so if you wanna drift you have to turn it on and if you dont wanna drift turn it off.
Yeah it's got a police radar on it and i want to get one when im older and make it so mint and fast and yeah my brother was so happy about this car that hes swapping for his ute and quad and dirt bike and he just cant wait to get it and he might take it to auckland for a ride so my uncles and stuff can see it and drive it maybe if they have there license and my uncles and that were so proud that he got a new car and it's exspensive.
here's my creative writing.
I've gone to huka falls and it's a nice sunny day to go and watch some people canoe down the fresh rough water of the huka falls and yeah my brother got this lamboghini and a dirt bike 450 4 stroke and his quad it's 150 cc and it's red with some writting on it.
My brother jumped in this car a z nissan 350 horse power and it go's so fast that it's so easy to crash coz it's just too fast and plus it's racing car sports car and it's it's loud when you go fast and when you take off, in second gear you hit 120km.
So imagine how fast you would be going on the fourth gear and it's a six speed and 6 litre and it's got a spoiler on the back the car and it's lowered and got black rims and tinted widows and it's a turbo and its good looking and it's got a traction thing on it so if you wanna drift you have to turn it on and if you dont wanna drift turn it off.
Yeah it's got a police radar on it and i want to get one when im older and make it so mint and fast and yeah my brother was so happy about this car that hes swapping for his ute and quad and dirt bike and he just cant wait to get it and he might take it to auckland for a ride so my uncles and stuff can see it and drive it maybe if they have there license and my uncles and that were so proud that he got a new car and it's exspensive.
Well done for completing a piece of writing, Solomon. You have included many facts and details about the car.
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